Critique Opportunity for the Audience

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Since I've reached +5k reads- thank you, by way-, and things being busy in my life, I want to know something. What do you think of the story, so far?I feel like I started off rushing the chapters in the beginning before making more longer chapters later on. Also, there's things I have to keep up with and the motivation to write despite a day of hard work irl (thus gaming with the boys to blow steam off). Yet, I want to know what my readers think of this story. Something I should get rid of (like the shitposts I made)? Something I've done well in? What you like the least and the most, basically. Things I'll most likely take into account either in or after the next chapter in this story. Have a good one!







Also, it's June (and seeing the hilariously lovable clusterfuck Volume 9 did to the community back in April) I just gotta post these. I'm chill with the LGBT community, here. I just see a meme opportunity. Don't get your panties twisted. Yes, I pulled this shit from Reddit.

 Yes, I pulled this shit from Reddit

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