Sugar, Spice and a pinch of Fantasy

Editing

Hey everyone!

Sorry for the sudden addition here, but I was hoping for some feedback from you guys.

You see, I plan to edit this story and hopefully get it published. And you guys have read it in its rawest form with all the mistakes and inconsistencies.

I was wondering if there were any questions left to be settled by the time the story ended. Also, if there's anything else I should do to make this story better, please do drop me a comment! :)

I plan to change some names here and there (suggestions are welcome! By this time, you guys know the characters so well, so tell me if you think up names that suit them better). I'm also going to change some relationship dynamics, make more relevant conversations, and add more description into Persephone and stuff. Also, I plan to incorporate some stuff that would make the sequel more understandable.

So as usual, I'm looking forward to your suggestions and ideas! 

Thanks in advance!

xx