the bad girl meets the bad boy

the bad girl meets the bad boy

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Emma By emmsan26 Updated Apr 18, 2016

whats up guys so i will try to do a story dont get mad if you think its bad  this will be my first book i ever done. This story  is about Emma who move to Florida from Sweden with her mum.Emma is 17 she had a really hard life in Sweden that nobody knew about. comment and vote :*

AbbeyBeallRomeo AbbeyBeallRomeo Nov 20, 2016
I know you're from Sweden so you don't know English very well, so maybe you shouldn't write in English or write the story in your language then have someone translate for you? It's kind of hard to understand.
OminousBliss OminousBliss May 16, 2016
I feel like full stops and commas weren't used in some parts that needed it. Get grammarly. It really does help with your writing :)
GoldFinchGirl123 GoldFinchGirl123 Jun 10, 2016
I've read enough of these books to know it's probably the bad boys mum