My Own Superman [The Players Game]

My Own Superman [The Players Game]

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(◑.◑) By cskt17 Updated May 08, 2014

PREVIOUSLY TITLED "THE PLAYERS GAME" & "THE NEW GUY."
         Dani Alexandrea has a story. A story that keeps her heart locked up, behind a wall of hatred from the past. Most people think there's this one person in the world that's apparently they're "True Love." Well, that's how Dani felt when she was with her ex-boyfriend, Jake. Or Jakey as she used to call him. It's been 3 years of high school, and before she knew it, it was her last year in high school before she graduates and goes to collage. The only thing wrong with that statement is: She never dated anyone in those 3 years. All because of Jake. But when a new boy comes to her school, she is faced with something much like her ex-boyfriend, - A player that will stop at nothing to piss her off.
    
    = DISCLAIMERRR! =
    This story does NOT have anything to do with the real Superman concept, it's just a nickname one the main character gets.

Great job, love this. :) I'll be waiting for the next update :-)
@cskt17 Haha alright! Sorry you can call me Captain Corrector ;) So yeah I hope I help and I hope your story tops the charts on the humor list!
cskt17 cskt17 Jul 19, 2012 04:37PM
@PeppermintCandies lol wow! Thanks for the editing session.. I really needed that. lawl. :D I'll be sure to fix that asap.
cskt17 cskt17 Jul 19, 2012 03:51PM
@PeppermintCandies Hey again, lol I just kinda updated the prologue, and took out some of the periods, and added some more information, so do you mind reading it again and telling me what you think?
cskt17 cskt17 Jul 19, 2012 03:46PM
@PeppermintCandies Aw, thanks so much for remembering to read one of my stories! And for sure I'll edit the prologue, and yeah I did notice it was pretty choppy. Thanks for bring these things to my attention, because I know now, how to fix these things in the future! Thanks again :)
cskt17 cskt17 Jul 19, 2012 04:41AM
@epic_reader i know, ill updatee. And I'm glad you like the cover, I made it myself.