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Dark Lullaby

Dark Lullaby

3.6K Reads 73 Votes 9 Part Story
Allie By ColorfulQuirks Updated Jul 30, 2011

What if falling in love could kill you? Damian Woods' parents have whisked him away to different places for their jobs. He learned to take care of himself, because his parents never do. A new transfer landed Damian in New Jersey, where he meets Amelia Raine. She was unlike anyone he'd ever met before. He has fallen helplessly for her and it seems she has done the same. But Amelia has dark secrets and a twisted past that could lead Damian to his death.

ColorfulQuirks ColorfulQuirks Apr 09, 2011
@CerebralAssassin Thanks for the comment! It means a lot to me that you think that! :D
shelbylw03 shelbylw03 Apr 04, 2011
Great start. I seriously love how you write and that ut doesn't seem like a cliche type story. I also like how its in a male pov. It makes it more unique. Overall it was great and really caught my attention.
ColorfulQuirks ColorfulQuirks Apr 02, 2011
@natsuriayuko Thanks for the advice. (: I fix that in later chapters.
Mlana3675 Mlana3675 Mar 25, 2011
I really like it, the detail is super good. Keep on writing! 
CompulsiveWriter CompulsiveWriter Mar 20, 2011
OK - firstly Paragraphs - start a new paragraph each time someone new speaks.  I like the characters and love the fact your main POV is a guy.  Great Chemistry!
dearagony16 dearagony16 Mar 20, 2011
I love this. Damian and Amelia seem like complete opposites, which is good.