Behind Locked Doors

Behind Locked Doors

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Mikala By JesusFreak Updated Feb 22, 2013

When the government crumbled in 2014, The Union emerged. Cruel and heinous, The Union took away everything that once stood as the prestigious United States of America. Out of the ashes, The Rebels arose. A secret society of teenagers set out to return America to its former state. In retaliation, The Union forced all youth to attend The Union School to be brainwashed with lies. What better way to take The Union than from within? Now it's up to The Rebels to infiltrate the school and expose The Union's true intentions. Join Rolin, Dakota, Alice, and Justin as they face their enemies head on in adventure of wits and schemes. Just remember to keep your friends close and your enemies closer.
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Jean5050 Jean5050 Aug 06, 2013
This is a great start. I loved your video and the premise of this story. I'm a libertarian so I think I'm definitely a rebel of the current system
Aesthextics Aesthextics Dec 28, 2012
Your plot seems really interesting and unique. Overall everything seems to flow pretty well.
smartolive5 smartolive5 Oct 06, 2012
I like how you opened the story. I have never read something like this. It has a good flow to it, and I think your writing is really really good.
Roxystorm Roxystorm Oct 03, 2012
This was interesting. i liked it. the way you started the book is different, and the whole idea sounds original. I have nothing else to say. i will be reading more of this. im intrigued :)
                              
                              
                              -Roxy-
Jean5050 Jean5050 Aug 27, 2012
The government is already brainwashing us with lies! especially in schools. That's nothing new. They are also power hungry and corrupt. Read some of Thomas Sorwell's writing to get more knowledgeable about the lefty USA.
LostinthisWorld LostinthisWorld May 01, 2012
I loved it!  I saw this while I was on my home page, and the title just entranced me!  I had to read it...so yeah, that's why I'm creeping on your story.  :)  Anyways, I think I'm gonna keep reading...loved it.