Winter's dream. (COMPLETED)

By elainechu

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A young sixteen year old girl,Maddy, who feels she doesn't fit in with her family and who is mortified of the... More

Winter's dream.
Winter's dream chapter two.
Winter's dream.-Chapter three.
Winter's dream -Chapter 4
Winter's dream-Chapter five.
Winter's Dream-Chapter6-MaddyHomeless?
Winter's dream. Chapter 7. Maddy alone?!
Winter's dream---- Finn's diary.
Winter's dream- chapter 8.
Chapter 9-Valentines special ;)
Chapter 10- Love at first sight ?
Chapter 11 - Paradise?
Chapter 12- time for school?
Chapter 13. Misery Business..
Chapter 14 confused Maddy! IT'S WAR FINN VS DAVE.
Chapter 16. 2'ND Date and decision time!
Chapter 17: Bye bye Dave! Hello Ro-Ro-MANCE. FINAL CHAPTER.

Chapter 15- The holidays & the first bet starts!

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By elainechu

Author's note: Yo yo yo! thanks for everyone reading,, i know that wattpad has been off for a while .. .;'( such a bummer! But now i'm going to concentrate on this story! Hehe!! It made me really laugh , Chapter 14.. Anyway I always laugh at my own jokes because I am SAD ;D Anyway, hope you enjoy, If you like it, then please vote, comment, fan! (VCF- I JUST MADE THAT UP AHAHA )  :P 

Winter's dream... Chapter 14. -

The holidays & the first bet starts!

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1.00 pm. the next day.

What the hell? I thought to myself.. I continued to watch television with Ashleigh, until she turned it off.

Her face was full of happy cheery smiles, unlike mine.. The depressed donkey. I get my moods off my dad, you see. He always pretends to be happy, then one minute when mum says 'no, i'm not ordering pizza today' BAM , he's gone into mad world.

"Mads, I know I'm not supposed to call you Mads, But I am.. Okay?" Ash asked like 'im asking you a question, but i'm answering it.. I'm just saying.'

"What happened to GaGa face?" I said, in a deep voice. 

"Well, I want Dave to think of me as a presentable, nice girl, who's not mean!"

"But you kind of are..!" Rolling my eyes, And huffing && puffing.

"Excuse me? I'm mean because I let my long lost friend inside my house to stay?"

"No.." Going into a high pinch voice.. thinking of what to say

"I mean, your horrible, because YOU want my boyfriend!" I screamed, and went outside in a hump.

Ashleigh's parents came downstairs, asking what had happen.

She replied ' Just hormones mum!'

I sighed, shutting the door. I didn't mean to get off at Ash.. I just-. No, I don't know. I hate people thinking i'm just parce the parcel.. Like a bet, get it?

-------phone beeps------

Opening my phone, there came a message from Finn.

How on Earth did he get my number? I asked myself... going into QUESTION land now.

Eurgh, i'm such a lose- OH MY FLIPPING AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

KNICKERS ON THE CARPET! What is this?! Running round in circles..

Finn just asked me out on A D-A-T-E. 

Oh. -.- I guess this is the bet then...

Why don't I ever get a say in things? It's always blah blah maddy you have to! Geesh, I am a human you know! 

"Ash! Wait up!" I ran back in the house, calm and friendly :D 

"What? I thought I was Miss.Horrible!"

"Look, I'm just a bit angry, with you, liking my boyfriend.."

"But you like Finn!"  She roared

"Listen..; I sat down on the exquisite sofa pulling her on the seat. 'Look, I know I've been a right cow, mucking things up with Dave, but.. I don't know. You see? Some things just make me look like a clutz. I love Dave.. with all my heart! But the problem is Finn! I can't help it, because my heart beats too much when I'm with him.." I sighed, letting go of my breath.. Wow, i actually did a whole speech with holding my breath! YAY. Ahem...

"I understand.You see, it's like the same situation! In all my life, nursery, primary, and now secondary.. I have had boys come & go! Feel free.. call me a tart,slapper,slut! I even slept with them. Now you can call me twice as harsh names. But the thing is, noone ever looks at me like that!" She placed my hands with hers, smiling.

"That stare right? Oh...He does that because he just came back from therapy Ash."

"Therapy?!" In a pitched tone. 

"He thinks he doesn't have big abs."

"You're joking?! Gosh, they are like huge! " We both laughed, and smiled.

"Listen, do you want to help me? I got a date with Finn, as a bet, because Dave and Finn made some decicions without my CONSENT.. Gosh, I'm still furious you know!"

"Haha! I can tell! Ever since kindergarten your cheeks have been bright red like blushing roses!"

"Come on!"

We both stared at eachother, laughing again. 

I never thought me and Ash would actually be best friends! There's loads of questions in my head at the moment. They're all spiralling around. These unwanted questions are in my head..

Hmmmm, What should I wear for the date? Should I even call it a DATE. What happens if i do choose Finn! Like, would I have to move into my parents house again? Oh... My parents! I miss them! And Libby! It's her birthday- oh F;'\;-CK ! Present, argh, Maddy, seriously, one word!

IDIOT!!!! I smacked my head, with Ashleigh laughing hysterically. It literally hurt... ah well, at least i'm back with Ashleigh! ^_^ 

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T H E D A T E.

I waited outside Ashleigh's house.. Wearing high black heels, and a floral dress from topshop. Laughing at myself again, I fell over. Luckily at arms Ashleigh saved my knee getting scratched.. 

Now all i'm waiting for is a luxury car to take me away, so i can decide what to do about this ridiculous cikhfuixhfixzn bet! 

15 minutes later, still looking like a LOSER outside... waiting for the foolish Finn.. (alliteration, haha ! Mr. Hughes is going to be so proud of me) 

A car parked outside, beeping at me. I hugged Ashleigh, and ran over to the car.

Oh... gosh! It's the camper van..ew! It still stinks like a fresh stinkbomb! 

"What the hell is this camper van doing here?!"

"Haha! Your dad let me borrow it! Awesome right?" He smiled, 

"No! Get rid of it!" I screamed ,stepping backwards. Suddenly, my heels lost total control like a loose racing car :OO I fell--- N0T. Finn suddenly came in front of me. Holding me in the position where you're about to kiss.. NOOOOOO, My eyes squidged together. Is he a vampire like Edward ?O_O ahah or is he a sparkling fairy! 

"Stop being a drama queen, fool. " He grinned. 

"I'm not!!" I stood back up, touching my hair, blushing as red as a strawberry..

"Yeah? Finn moved forward. 'Actually I've changed my mind. " I could hear his breath, his heartbeat.

"What are you doing?!" I moved back, making sure noone was looking.

"I love it when you talk sexy." Finn said, nodding his head.

"wh-wh-wha?!" My mouth went open with my eyes squidging together.... huhhh..... =.='

"Get in the car. " He shut the car door, slamming and laughing at me while I'm still in recovery.. WHAT THE HELL IS THIS FOOL DOING?! OMG...

I smelt his scent... :OOOOOOO HE'S USING MY DAD'S COLOGNE/AFTERSHAVE!!!!!!!!!

"THAT'S MY DAD'S AFTERSHAVE!" I SHOUTED, POINTING THE FINGER IN HIS FACE.

He smirked, looking at me. 

"Do you think your dad is the ONLY person in the world to use aftershave like that?" 

"Well no- but you do live with him!" 

"Shutup, we're nearly there. " Smiling.

I smiled too, I don't know why..

Finny fishy foo fooo faaaaaaatty arse! Haha! I wish i could say that , but he would make me look like a joke, 10 X more worse..

I looked round the camper van. Seeing chairs, and plumped up cushions. Oh! And Libby's prezzies!

"You do realise it's Lib's birthday today?" He looked at me.

"Yes, er. Could you give this to her please? " I put the present in front of his face. 

"Please?" I smiled again... looking like a lost puppy. 

Thedestination!!!! ♥♥

"Here we are!" Finn opened his hands ,feeling the cool air. While his blue check shirt floated up. His hair was blowing back and forth.. I stared as I was at the back. The sun was going down.. 

"It's beautiful! But, i thought you were taking me to a resturant? It's a bit cold here." I put my hands together.

"Here," He passed me his jacket, smiling.

"I hate restruants. "

"Please... Noone hates resturants!" I giggled wearing the jacket on my shoulder.

"Fine... My mum never taught me how to have table manners. But your mum has taught me!"

"So why don't we go now?" I asked.

"Erm... Well, i've set this up! A waste of time, to waste such good food! When I was homeless, I didn't waste any food! Even if it was a crumb! "

"Yeah.." I looked down playing with the sand. "The beach is beautiful though!"

"Uhuh.... Well, let's eat!"

We both tucked in, eating bread and looking at the beautiful sky. 

I never had this experience before! This whole romancey thing!

I ate my bread, looking round.

"Stop staring! Geesh! Do you want this picnic to be awkward?!"

"Who has a picnik at night?!" I asked standing up, clearing my hands.

"That guy from watch dog! Or cop school on cbbc!"

"You seriously watch that? Plus it wasn't night, it was afternoon!" I asked, moving my head forward.

I then felt like I was Finn. Because Finn usually says this kind of stuff.

"Yeah, so what?You tv freak..- What about you?!" He asked in a deep tone. 

I started eating soup. Yum! I know this ! HOMEMADE YUMMY MUMMY SOUP! YES! HAHAA ! I am so cool. I can't believe I remember this soup! 

I started smiling at the soup, Then Finn kept looking at me with his eyebrows looking like 'what the fxkxk are you smiling at some soup?!' 

"ARGH" I bellowed. Finn's jacket flew right over my shoulder. 

"Help!" I shouted.

Finn ran over the picnik, chasing the jacket through the sand. 

I looked backwards. Then I suddenly heard noises. Muffled noises in the background.. That didn't sound like Finn, I thought to myself. 

I looked back. Two men grabbed my arms!

"HELP!" I SHOUTED But they put their hand across my mouth.

Then I used my ninja technique.. SPITTING!

I spat on their hands and they automatically reacted. 

"HAHAAH" I shouted, laughing again.  I ran near to Finn. 

But the two men came back and said

"OH YOU LITTLE- " And grabbed my arms and legs.

The force was too strong, I couldn't move!

They stood me up hurting me, asking me where is my handbag!

"Let. Her.Go. " A man's voice said.

"Finn!" I couldn't speak, everything was muffled.

"Who are you then?" They laughed.

The two men were thieves and vindictive people. They were bald, wearing black jackets, and black tops.. (seriously fashion FAUX PAS!)

"I'm her boyfriend. " WHA?!

"Awwwwwwwww, give her a kissy wissy?" They both laughed

"And the police." EH?! I frowned.

The two looked at me,then looked up at eachother when they let go of my arms. Suddenly, I elbowed their manlyhood.. -cough cough-

The two screamed in agony, and pain.

Finn stared at me, then instantly punched the two, and called the cops.

 "Wow for me?" I asked. Finn put the jacket back on my shoulder, and zipped it tightly.

"No, I wanted to save the Jacket. It was expensive, you know. "

"What about the two men?"

"You ask too many questions." He replied looking down.

I faced him, and smiled.

"Thanks."

"Mmm."

:D OMG. I CANNOT BELIEVE FINN SAVED ME!! AHAHAHAHAHHAAHHA YAAAAY!! 

The conversation went quiet.. All we could hear was the waves 

"Finn...You know when we were cooking...."

"Yes... ages ago? Yes." 

"Erm, I got a picture on my phone with you holding a rolling pin in the wrongest way EVER.." I showed the picture and giggled.

"Give me the phone!!!" He said, trying to snatch it. 

I ran as fast as I could in the beach. Then I suddenly fell on the sand, and so did Finn.

He layed on top of me, unexpected.

The feeling was weird. My heart felt like it was going to leap out. And it was NOT because of running, i can give you that! 

Our eyes linked eachothers. Then as I closed my eyes, i felt his lips on mine.  WOW! Can I have this moment forever please?

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Author's note: YAYAYAYAAYAYAYAYYAYA SO ROMANCEYYY!!! ;'D WOOOHOOOOO 

Hehe! Sorry if i put too much speech into this!  plesh comment , fan ,vote ^__________^ YOU'LL MAKE MY DAY ;D

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