Username: _Jhade
Title: Diary of a Dead Girl
Point: 92/100
Position: 5th
Review: The storyline of the book is very good. I just feel that the writer can improve on making the book a little more realistic and make use of more words to give better explanations.
Also in the blurb, I don't think it is a good idea to put "Give this short story a try". It would be better to write the blurb in such a way that readers would be intrigued into wanting to read the book.
Username: mashybran
Title: Vampira: Underworld
Point: 93/100
Position: 4th
Review: I really loved the story plot, it kept me intrigued and the overall enjoyability was superb too. I almost didn't want it to end but I guess the story is not complete yet.
The one thing I just noticed is that that correct use of grammar, punctuations and paragraphing should be improved upon. Then the book would be better.
Author: EhPreel07
Book Title: April and John
B-9
C&T-9. 5
C-14
P-24
CD-9
G-19
E-9. 5
T-94
Position: 3rd
The story holds its own individuality and grace. It firmly illustrates the beauty and bonding of sibling love with all the teasing and notorious elements.
Author: JayReshkee
Book Title: Imperfect Puzzle
B-9
C&T-9. 5
C-15
P-25
CD-10
G-20
E-10
T-98. 5
Position: 2nd
This book is a fantastic. So interesting and rejuvenating that it pleases you in a satisfactory way. The subtle unfolding of characters makes the book more captivating.
Just alter the blurb a bit and make it more groofy. Other than that it's a perfect pack.
Author: Leahberry4ever
Book Title: The fallen Angel
Blurb (B)-10
Cover and Title (C&T)-9
1 Chapter (C)-15
Plot(P)-25
Character Development (CD)-10
Grammar (G)-20
Enjoyment (E)-10
Total (T)-99
Position: 1st
This was the best story I have ever read . Such a strong concept accompanied by perfect execution . Well Explained I must say. But improve the cover a bit.
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