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Furry fandom
Name: mango
Nickname: also known a *as fire
Why? Who calls her this?
Gender: female
Age: about teen age *teenage
What do you mean by "about"? Is it just not explicitly stated or does the story take place over a period that spans her teenage years?
Species: snow leapord *leopard
No nationality
Occupation: just eats bananas all day in the rainforest
I mean-
Family: parents are papaya and coconut
I don't care what her parents' names are. It doesn't add anything. I would rather you put their dynamics and the parents' personality and occupations.
Appearance: she has orange fur with black swirls and her toe beans and her eyes are green Also her tail tip and ear tufts are white. She is about the average size of a human
A generic design but her species limits her from creativity so 🤷 I guess.
Personality: she is short tempered *short-tempered and quite nice, she lovers fruit and birds.
"Quite nice" doesn't really illustrate anything specific. A person can be nice in a lot of ways and "quite" is redundant. A person can be generous, selfless, supportive and/or helpful. Those could all be expressed as "nice".
Liking things is not a personality trait.
She's survived lots of natural disasters and is able to sneak up very quietly. And basically that is it. Thanks for reading!!!
Also not a personality trait.
Total:
0/10
I would hardly call this an OC. There's such little information to go off of that I have trouble imagining anything beyond an appearance.
This character does not have a distinct identity nor is she interesting in any way.
You need to invest some serious time into writing her into an actual character with personality, layers, importance to story etc.
Use my template and/or other reviews as a feel for what information you need to add.
