The more people who interact with this story the more self conscious I get. I started writing this story directly after The Force Awakens when I was only 14. Now, a little over 4 years later, my writing style has changed so much and has evolved to a more eloquent level of writing.
I would strip this whole story and start fresh, slowing it down and really considering certain aspects of this story I have grown to loathe.
4 years ago I wanted to write a FanFiction unlike others I had read. Where it's not a slow burn and takes upwards of 10 chapter for the story to go where you wanted. I was an extremely impatient and ill researched writer.
If you want it I will do a rewrite, only fixing the chapters up to the standard I prefer. I wouldn't add new chapters or slow down the story how I would love to, just fix up a particular awful writing style.
If a rewrite is what's wanted it will be a gradual process as I am currently engrossed in a new story I'm writing. Please feel free to read that while you wait for rewrites.
My new story, 'Forever Indebted', is set after The Rise of Skywalker. It is what I would wish to happen following the events of the movie. It is a million times more planned than this story. I currently have 2 chapters waiting to go out on their scheduled days and I've planned the following 5 chapters after that.
Please comment on this paragraph if you would wish for a gradual rewrite. Only fixing grammatical errors and poor writing technique.
Thank you!
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Darkness - (a Reylo fanfiction)
FanfictionThe darkness runs through Rey and she can feel it. What will she do? Will she follow that path and become the greatest sith that ever lived? Or will she become the greatest Jedi that ever lived? Well... a lot can happen in one year. ...
