Who cares more about Taliah's birthday;Khalil. . . . . Or Dominic?
Let's find out. . . . .
(Taliah and Khalil sitting on the couch)
(Taliah lays head on Khalil's shoulder)
"Baby?"said Taliah.
"What?"said Khalil.
"Do you know what today is?"said Taliah.
"Your birthday."said Khalil.
(Taliah smiles)
"You know what I want? A nice,romantic dinner."
"Well you can fall back on dat,cause I'm not giving you nothing. As far as I'm concerned,your birthday is just another day of the week."said Khalil.
(Taliah smiles fades away)
"Baby,where is all this coming from?"said Taliah.
"this isn't coming from nowhere,It just came from me."said Khalil.
(Conversation ends)
(Taliah gets up and leaves)
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In class . . . . .
Dominic:"Hey Taliah."
Taliah:"Hey Dominic."
Dominic:"Heard your birthday was today;happy birthday."
(Taliah smiles)
Taliah:"Thanks. You're the first to say that;besides my friends. Not even my own boyfriend is getting me a present."
Dominic:"not even your boyfriend?"
Taliah:"not even."
Dominic looks at the rings she has on her fingers. "I like your rings,it's cute."
Taliah:"thanks."
Dominic:"you like rings?"
Taliah:"love 'em."
(Dominic pauses)
"What kind of ring you want for your birthday?"
Taliah:"you're getting something for my birthday?"
Dominic:"sure. What kind of ring you want?"
Taliah:"well,I like rings that have that big glass stone in it."
Dominic:"you got a deal. I will give you nice pretty ring. When I come over to give you your present,wear something nice.
Taliah:Okay.
*Comment on my book*
Who cares more?
Stay tuned.
