EDITING UNDERWAY

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Hey guys.
Did you miss me?

Okay.
So, here's the gist:
As most of you know,
I'm changing this story.
Not too much, the premise still is the same:
Percy gets kidnapped, Team Flash team up, yadda yadda.

But like I said, I'm changing some things.

Uno: Timeline.

Instead of the beginning of the season, I'm going to start it during the Earth Two events. This way, it'll make sense and wouldn't cram everything in Team Flash's and the demigod's faces while their wounds are still fresh.
Plus, the characters would interact much easier, and I don't have to make up to many of my own introductions.

Dos: Titles

It's confusing as shit.

Tres: Character Interactions

I'm making some characters more prominent like Sally, Paul, Iris and Caitlin.
They felt weird, tbh. I didn't like how I wrote them.
I also examined their characters as best as I can, so I can write them how they are. (Cough DND transcripts Cough)

That's it.

IF YOU WANT TO READ THE OLD DRAFT, WAIT. I'LL POST IT WHEN I CAN.

DO NOT GO PAST 1/ HOME SWEET HOME AND DO NOT READ THE UNEDITED CHAPTERS IF YOU WANT TO KNOW THE NEW, IMPROVED STORY. (I MEAN YOU CAN, BUT IT'S CONFUSING AF)

Thank you for your cooperation.

readingisapriority

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