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Well im sorry to say .....

We managed to save the patient but shes in a coma

luz was in a coma .

Anne started to cry in my arms blake dropped to the floor and sobbed .

Erick left the building looking angry yoyo went behind him and i was frozen i felt hot tears burn my cheeks .

I guess everyone reacted because there was a probability sje wouldnt wake up .

I FEARED THAT

I didnt wanna see my girlfreind die .

Blake called jae

Jae came to the hospital

He looked tired he looked as if he was crying

How is she he said approaching me

Shes in a coma i said looking down and wiping a tear from my cheek

Jae lost it he went outside this time i followed him

Jae what are you doing ???

He punched a wall causing it to crack abit

He turned his back to the wall and slid down and started crying

Come on jae get up you have to be strong for your girl freind

He continued to cry .

Jaes p.o.v

Shes in a coma he said
I felt anger and sadness take over me
I was so mad a drunk driver put her in this position , how drunk driver caused so much with out getting hurt just a few scratches
I went out side i needed to release my anger . I ended up punching the wall and breaking down infront of joel .
How cpuld i be strong my girlfreind is in a coma , and im afraid of losing her . But ill stay with her as many days as i need to stay to help her wake up i want to see her dazling eyes and her beautiful smile .

Two weeks later

I sat down at the lunch table depressed , so many people were doing promposals because prom was near .

And luz still hadnt woken up , i wanted to spend time with her as long as i could i cant stand stay here in school !

I wish she could wake up so i could tell her how much i love her and how much i miss her . Blake hasnt come anymore wich is wierd , right after class im going to see luz .

*At the hospital*

I brought luz more flowers her room was crowded with flowers and balloons . She even had teddy bear i know how much shes loved teddy bears .

I sang to her but she didnt wake up .

I talked to her like i always did , i held her hand and talked to her for hours , but she wouldnt respond .

Her finger would twitch a few times but she wouldnt do anything else .

After guest time was over i headed somewhere other than back home . I drove to this mountian with this amazing view . There was so many stars .

I saw a shooting star pass

I wished luz would wake up

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