COMMENTING PERIOD: Sunday, June 18 - Saturday, June 24, 2023 11:59 P.M. PDT
ROUND ADMINISTRATOR: AmericanBruja
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COMMENT TOPIC: Scene building/world construction is the backbone of any story but it can be difficult for writers to strike a balance. Were you transported to 'that time or place'? Point out where the authors may have been under or over descriptive and suggest any possible improvements. Min. length: 6 sentences. Please post in the last chapter of this week's assignment.
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META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):
👍 or THUMBS UP-Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])
☕ or NEEDS CAFFEINE-Elaborate why you think improvement is needed. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])
💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]
😥 or TEARS (crying or feeling very emotional) [OPTIONAL]
❤ or HEART (love something, more than a thumbs up) [OPTIONAL]
😵 or CONFUSED (don't understand something) [OPTIONAL]
😂 or LAUGHING (made you laugh) [OPTIONAL]
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Member: Partner Partner's Book - Chapters
ENFORCER: AmericanBruja
RonASewell • JLAnderson0713 Of Blood and Honor - 35
JLAnderson0713 • Psychadelish The Flame Game - 9
Psychadelish • JLAnderson0713 In the Name of Love - 9
RichardPDX • MGHicks_Reloaded Origin Among Us - 33, 34
MGHicks_Reloaded • RichardPDX Naked in New York - Character Analysis 5 [See directions below, please]
RichardPDX • SouthPawStance Devil Take the Hindmost - 24, 25
SouthPawStance • RichardPDX Wasted in Waldport - 27, 28 [LIGHT EDIT: please see directions in LIGHT EDITING chapter]
Echo4Echo • AmericanBruja American Bruja: The Los Angeles Cauldron - 10
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ENFORCER: MichaelHoliday
AmericanBruja • Echo4Echo Letters to Maxine - 9
IanReeve216 • AuthorJMColes Guardians Away (Book 2) - 7.1, 7.2, 7.3
AuthorJMColes • IanReeve216 The Rings of Salammis - Kronos parts 1-3 [First chapters comments; please see instructions below]
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Wayfarer's Lamppost Book Club • Vol. 5 • 2023
RandomVolume 5 • Beginning with Round 260 - 1 January 2023 Wayfarer's Lamppost Book Club is created in partnership with the now-closed-forever Next Big Recognition Contest (NBR). Wayfarer's Lamppost Book Club aims to provide what no other book club has...
