Round 273 • April 9-April 15, 2023

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COMMENTING PERIOD: Sunday, April 9 - Saturday, April 15, 2023 11:59 P.M. PDT

ROUND ADMINISTRATOR: AmericanBruja

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COMMENT TOPIC: Pace, it's important. Too slow and you lose the reader. Too fast and you may lose the details. Comment about the pace of the book overall thus far. Min. length: 6 sentences. Please post in the last chapter of this week's assignment.


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META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

👍 or THUMBS UP-Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

or NEEDS CAFFEINE-Elaborate why you think improvement is needed. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]

😥 or TEARS (crying or feeling very emotional) [OPTIONAL]

or HEART (love something, more than a thumbs up) [OPTIONAL]

😵 or CONFUSED (don't understand something) [OPTIONAL]

😂 or LAUGHING (made you laugh) [OPTIONAL]

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Member: Partner Partner's Book - Chapters

ENFORCER:

RonASewell • JLAnderson0713 Of Blood and Honor - 25

JLAnderson0713 • RonASewell A Dish Served Cold - Plot Analysis [please see directions below]

RichardPDX • MGHicks_Reloaded Origin Among Us - 13, 14

MGHicks_Reloaded • RichardPDX Naked in New York - 13, 14

RichardPDX • SouthPawStance Devil Take the Hindmost - 7, 8

SouthPawStance • RichardPDX Wasted in Waldport - 7, 8 [LIGHT EDIT: please see directions in LIGHT EDITING chapter]

Echo4Echo • AmericanBruja American Bruja: The Los Angeles Cauldron - 1 [First Chapter comment; please see directions below]

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ENFORCER: MichaelHoliday

AmericanBruja • Echo4Echo Letters to Maxine - 1 [First Chapter comment; please see directions below]

IanReeve216 • AuthorJMColes The Vigilante & The Dragon (Book 1) - Character Analysis 3 [please see directions below]

AuthorJMColes • IanReeve216 The CRES Code - 65, 66, 67

JaxonBlacc • Korra_99 In my Skin - 3

Korra_99 • JaxonBlacc Moonshadow - 18

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