Round 274 • April 16-April 22, 2023

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COMMENTING PERIOD: Sunday, April 16 - Saturday, April 22, 2023 11:59 P.M. PDT

ROUND ADMINISTRATOR: SapphireAlena

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COMMENT TOPIC: Ending each chapter with a hook or cliffhanger ensures readers invest in the story. Too many things compete for time and attention, writers cannot risk giving readers reason to set the story aside. Reflect upon the hooks/cliffhangers. Min. length: 3 sentences each chapter. Please post each response in the corresponding chapter.

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META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

👍 or THUMBS UP-Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

or NEEDS CAFFEINE-Elaborate why you think improvement is needed. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]

😥 or TEARS (crying or feeling very emotional) [OPTIONAL]

or HEART (love something, more than a thumbs up) [OPTIONAL]

😵 or CONFUSED (don't understand something) [OPTIONAL]

😂 or LAUGHING (made you laugh) [OPTIONAL]

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Member: Partner Partner's Book - Chapters

ENFORCERAmericanBruja

Anderson0713 Of Blood and Honor - 26

JLAnderson0713 • RonASewell A Dish Served Cold - Review [please see directions below]

RichardPDX • MGHicks_Reloaded Origin Among Us - 15, 16

MGHicks_Reloaded • RichardPDX Naked in New York - 15, 16

RichardPDX • SouthPawStance Devil Take the Hindmost - 9, 10

SouthPawStance • RichardPDX Wasted in Waldport - 9, 10 [LIGHT EDIT: please see directions in LIGHT EDITING chapter]

Echo4Echo • AmericanBruja American Bruja: The Los Angeles Cauldron - 1 [First Chapter comment; please see directions below]

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ENFORCERMichaelHoliday

AmericanBruja • Echo4Echo Letters to Maxine - 2 [First Chapter comment; please see directions below]

IanReeve216 • AuthorJMColes The Vigilante & The Dragon (Book 1) - Character Analysis 4 [please see directions below]

AuthorJMColes • IanReeve216 The CRES Code - 68, 69, 70

JaxonBlacc • Korra_99 In my Skin - 4

Korra_99 • JaxonBlacc Moonshadow - 19

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