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Finally! Thank you to all the Team protectors for the results. All the players' books were jewels. These are the results based on your Round 2- Best Writing style
Review: the plot and characters are thoroughly planned and I appreciate it very much. But because of more than 1 POV, I felt like 3rd person omniscient would have been more appropriate and helped you save time. That's my opinion. I also read you have edited the book and as a writer myself I can relate to the nack that eats you up to be better but you know there is always something that is left behind and we just go over and over again until it is perfect. So don't get disappointed as I do because there were minor mistakes. Best of luck with your future books!
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Review: I wish you had instead "shown" and not just told what could've potentially demonstrated and benefited the characters. There were plain texts (not as in just 'texts' but as a whole) of "telling" about how and what it was between the MCs. Adapting to an effective writing style could've immensely changed the output of the story.
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