Wow! Author of this story here. I am going to completely rework this story soon into a complete coherent thought. That sounds really weird right? I said that a while ago too but I never had the time. Now I do, I have too much time actually.
I want to know though, what do you think I should change or keep? It probably won't affect anything but I'd like some constructive criticism that my younger self never got. I can write better now I think
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Halfway Blinded Racoon - A Dream SMP AU
FanfictionTommy finds himself being trapped in a corner by adults who have been brainwashed and trying to kill him as his best friend is forced to watch. As he bled out, he attempted to smile at Tubbo one last time before he passed out... Hi! This is my first...
