Reality Bites - Fairytailwonderland

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Title: Reality Bites

Author:  fairytailwonderland

Genre: Action/Fantasy

Summary:  

Ari had led a normal life until it was turned upside down by something out of this world (literally). She's been pulled into another land's century-old conflict and has no place to go but forward into its heart. What troubles will this lead her to?

My view:

When I read the first little part (a semi-prologue maybe?) I found that I could relate. I know what it's like to live an incredibly boring life and to want to just escape. Hence my writing - it's a way of freedom!

It was definitely an interesting hook, nabbed my attention immediately.

Reading on, Ari is a brilliant protagonist. Interesting and brave, courageous even in the face of danger. 

The story has some really great details and descriptions, especially when describing the dangerous creature - and more importantly emotions.

I could almost feel her fear.

Brilliant so far!

Out of ten? Eight.

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⏰ Last updated: Apr 28, 2013 ⏰

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