Strong Mind, Strong Body, Strong Heart

Strong Mind, Strong Body, Strong Heart

6.7K Reads 80 Votes 15 Part Story
Rachel By gilmoregurl1fan Updated Mar 06, 2011

VITAL INFORMATION: THIS IS STILL IMMORTAL HEARTBREAK JUST WITH A DIFFERENT TITLE!!
Eliana Skye is 16(and 4/5, as she frequently points out) and only wants to mind her own business. Her brother, Darian, who's been in the hospital since she was 11, finally has a chance to live life again, and her family will do just about anything to have him back. But is the risk worth taking, as worse comes to worst? Eliana fails to stay out of drama when she finds herself in a love triangle- well, square- with the hot, mysterious bad boy whose feelings are always hidden behind his gleaming eyes, the sensitive, gorgeous Austrailian college student, and her brother's best friend. Who finally wins her over?

ChristianRose ChristianRose Apr 05, 2011
@SportsWritingKing VOTED AND FANNEd...
                              Let me know if you take up on my suggestion.
ChristianRose ChristianRose Apr 05, 2011
Don't change the title, I think its fine... Good first chapter too!
                              I think a good title would be "Strong Mind, Body, and Heart, But Still Weak"
gilmoregurl1fan gilmoregurl1fan Nov 17, 2010
@jakepomps Thank you very much!(:
                              @Miss_Fletcher I'll return the favor as soon as I'm done uploading the next chapter!
jakepomps jakepomps Nov 17, 2010
This is really good!  I like how you started out describing how Eliana was.
                              Write more soon!
Miss_Fletcher Miss_Fletcher Nov 16, 2010
@gilmoregurl1fan You're very welcome. Please return the favor when you have time :)
Miss_Fletcher Miss_Fletcher Nov 16, 2010
"There were a couple of couple of typo's," she says then types "we're" instead of  "were".
                              
                              Fail!
                              
                              :)