On a Hazy Day

On a Hazy Day

5K Reads 70 Votes 19 Part Story
Carly_the_alien By Carly_the_alien Completed

Alexis Tey doesn't lead such a normal teen life. No, she's not a vampire, nor is she a mega pop-star. Alex is blind and absolutely hates Christmas. Will moving away from past memories erase this hatred, or will it make it worse?

anakelia anakelia Jan 07, 2011
Wow. I agree with everyones  comments on here...so I wont repeat it and just say ...wow! something very  original.
Carly_the_alien Carly_the_alien Jan 02, 2011
@ParamoreRules121 thanks :)
                               @horsegirl101 thank you :) I think I will fix that part later on when I'm editing the whole story.
elena_anderson elena_anderson Jan 02, 2011
OMG you are a really talented writer. The description is amazing. You are very creative I love your plot but I think you could tweak the part were the man comes to the door
IBreakHearts IBreakHearts Dec 27, 2010
this is awsome i agree with @steph612 never read a story like this but still good.Voted:)
Carly_the_alien Carly_the_alien Dec 27, 2010
@steph612 Thanks :)
                              And I'm kind of editing the story again on Word so I'll try to add that in.
                              It's kind of hard since she's blind :$ 
                              But thanks for the advice ! :D
Carly_the_alien Carly_the_alien Dec 27, 2010
@JuliaBuii Nah, to be truthful, it actually isn't even on the What's Hot List.
                              I don't really care as long as I have a few readers or if I atleast get someone to critic my works. I just write more for fun. :)
                              
                              Thanks Julia :)