He Left Me...

He Left Me...

145K Reads 1.4K Votes 30 Part Story
Me By Meandmywords1 Updated Jun 02, 2013

What would happen if Bella Swan never jumped off the cliff? If Edward's plan followed through and he delayed his return until she was 21 and engaged to Jacob Black? Would he stick around to watch and protect her, even when she wasn't his?

  • hot
  • jacob
  • leah
  • loss
  • love
  • romance
  • saga
  • story
  • twilight
  • victoria
  • volturi
  • wolf
Mysneakz Mysneakz May 04, 2014
YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AGH GOOOD JOB!!!
meelee1972 meelee1972 Sep 27, 2012
I love the way the cold ocean's water reminds her of Edward's skin... She's tormented by her love for both.
meelee1972 meelee1972 Sep 27, 2012
Wow, you are so talented..,. Very few of the "what if" stories get me, but your writing is so easy to get lost in, I love it. - Definately will keep reading... Great work! :))
                              ......... I'm barely thru the 1st chapter, by the way. - good stuff.
LostInOblivion LostInOblivion Jun 20, 2012
Love part1 its amazing! I absoultutly was and kind of still am obsessed with Twilight. I usualy dont read its fanfictions but this one is amazing!!
Natalie789 Natalie789 Mar 19, 2012
WOW!!!!! First part and it's beyond amazing!! The way you have Bella always remembering Edward my her angel is just amazing! Your writing is so good!! I'm speechless about the ending lines!! You really couldn't have wrote a better part 1!!! I'm trilled to continue reading :D
AshleyOrta AshleyOrta Feb 23, 2012
i like it but i wanted edward to come back   TEAM EDWARD RULES