HEIR | Book 1 | A Wattpad Featured Story

HEIR | Book 1 | A Wattpad Featured Story

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Marcella By MarcellaUva Updated Mar 14

In the Five Kingdoms of Saol Eile, magic is the only currency and those who have the most cast long shadows across the land. The worst of tyrants have risen, asserting their power by calling themselves kings by right; emperors, by the laws of magic, and monarchs, by the wealth they've managed to procure.

When it's rumored that an ancient curse will return to the land, tyrant-kings are forced to submit to a far more dangerous power that threatens to engulf the kingdoms in darkness once its reunited with its vessel -- the one, true heir.

Rising from the shadows, eighteen-year-old Cecily Trask must confront the unlikely notion that her magic is the key to saving her kingdom from a reign of darkness. Forced to accept a power she could neither understand nor control, Cecily has more than a little trouble on her hands when she crosses swords with a devastatingly handsome prince, a fiercely loyal dwarf, and an ambitious elf with a dangerous secret of his own.

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Copyright © Marcella Uva, 2014 - 2016.
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You have a very artistic way of writing, and I like how instead of placing lines and dots, you put a sword to symbolize the end of the chapter. Very unique perspective and story as well.
P.S. I think that Tom would make a fantastic elf if they were to make a Silmarillion series. I wholeheartedly approve of your casting here!
Saika24 Saika24 Feb 28
Dramatic first chapter. Love it. Sad I didn't start reading it earlier.
MarcellaUva MarcellaUva Mar 17
@xmoofish She definitely fits the look of my main character :o) I hope you enjoy the story!!
West_YW West_YW Jun 15
Enthralling prologue. You have a way with words. :) Daire's language is quite pretty, if sad and dark. Looking forwards for the rest of the story!
There is real finesse in the style of this prologue. It was a great read. I can't wait to read the rest of this :)