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Jay<3 By Midnight_Wolf Updated Nov 14, 2013

Blood pulsing throughout my body, my breathing comming in heavy gasps for air. My hearing growing stronger, I could hear the calm even tone of the beast standing by.Tears streamed down my cheeks as I clutched to my burning sides. I never felt anything like this before, I kept moving forward trying to get out of the woods and in the view of people, but the pain didn't let me. What the hell was going on?!?

Alaeryel Alaeryel Jun 18, 2014
Spelling, Grammar--everything was very well done and quite captivating also!!!
lunner101 lunner101 May 11, 2013
OMG. this book is so awesome. I can't wait till you wright more. this book is so inspiring. I can't stop reading it. u have to wright more. I can't wait
ArmadilloSushimi ArmadilloSushimi Mar 27, 2012
I only read the [short] prologue and I'm hooked already! Keep posting lol its awesome
Midnight_Wolf Midnight_Wolf Mar 18, 2012
@CassDN12 Thank you(: @Cheergirl808 awww thank you that means a lot. Im happy your enjoying it haha @ilysmb Thank you :)
Dance_Away808 Dance_Away808 Feb 29, 2012
Wow, I am kind of a new writer. So I am more writer than reader, but your story BITEN makes me want to read and read. So good job!!! I have no complaints.
Midnight_Wolf Midnight_Wolf Feb 08, 2012
@SnookieTawa Thank you...I love all of your comments it means a lot you have no idea :)