The Vampire Next Door

The Vampire Next Door

34 Part Story 8M Reads 179K Votes
Rachel By rachel2k22 Completed

He had spent centuries with only himself for company, he fed, tortured and killed that was his life and he liked it that way, until she came along and stirred something in him, something he couldn't and wouldn't accept.
    
    
    “If I were you I’d keep that stake sharp. Don’t expect anymore visits like this, next time I come I expect you to use that thing,” he told her pointing to the stake on the bed, and then he was gone.

bmathers411 bmathers411 Feb 01, 2016 10:06PM
A little repetitive on the internal dialogue. Otherwise this is a great start! Excited to read on
derpyhyena derpyhyena Jan 19, 2016 05:21AM
YEEEEETTTTTT. *BENDS ONE LEG BACKWARDS AND LANDS ON THE FLOOR.*
He's a vampire with awesome sight. He killed a b****. And his name is....John Cena!!
He's eating someone. Dear baby Jesus on a roller coaster! Run lady! Run!
You are great with your descriptions. I love this story so far.
Jadie1210 Jadie1210 Jan 05, 2016 01:06AM
That's is disgusting this guy sounds like the boss from King for a Day by Pierce The Veil if u know who I'm talking about we can be friends