i n s a n e .

i n s a n e .

19.2K Reads 709 Votes 23 Part Story
miahemmings By miahemmings Completed

rose daze is a 17 year old girl with depression. her mom caught her cutting once again and put her in a mental hospital. but rose doesnt belong there. she thought her life was over. her roommate was a serial killer and no matter how many times he tells her he wont kill her, she still worries. “the people here are insane...im not like that” but little did she know, that serial killer would save her life.

  • 5secondsofsummer
  • 5sos
  • ashton
  • calum
  • clifford
  • hemmings
  • hood
  • hospital
  • insane
  • irwin
  • luke
  • mental
  • michael
  • murder
RoseannaDarling RoseannaDarling Jul 24, 2017
hey girl great start I like it and don't say you suck cuz you don't keep writing and your writing will get better
RoseannaDarling RoseannaDarling Jul 24, 2017
hey girl great start I like it and don't say you suck cuz you don't keep writing and your writing will get better
KrystalWulf KrystalWulf Mar 12
It isn't bad, but the the grammar and punctuation could be improved. The first letter of names and sentences are capitalized, and then if a word is a contraction (like "don't") it will have an apostrophe separating one or a few letters from the rest.
                              Otherwise this is good!
_KrissyLovesYou_ _KrissyLovesYou_ Apr 06, 2016
Learn what CAPITALS are. And not only when someone is yelling. The rest was good, though.