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MonSteRs In Hiding

MonSteRs In Hiding

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luvs_blue By luvs_blue Updated Apr 28, 2012

Blaze and her brother, Isaiah, were best friends, but were orphans and didn't have a home of thier own. And, oh yeah, thier an unknown type of monster. And just to top it, they were being hunted for their very excistance by the goverment when they don't even have a clue about them. Then when things are bad, they get worse. Blaze and her brother are seperated and Blaze is on her own. Can she find a new home or will things get worse for her and is she going to have to protect more of the people she cares about. . .?

constancebonacieux constancebonacieux Feb 20, 2012
woah!!!! totally hooked!!! :D cant wait to read more, but im gonna have to cuz i gotta go do hmwk :P love it!!!
Leopold Leopold Jan 25, 2012
Its pretty good all in all, just a few detail you need to work out.  You kind of give away everything too soon.  Maybe hold back a few more details, wait longer to tell whats going on, the action comes in a bit fast.  But it is a good story, if you got this perfected it would be great.
featherynightowl featherynightowl Apr 02, 2011
erm....nothing..just WOW your a good writer and this plot is very origional keep up the good work xx