Feedbackplease Stories

So, I've been working on a few different stories recently to improve my writing, many of which being JJK stories! None of them have progressed much (I think the longest...

The story of a young girl growing up with her cold hearted mother. Follow her life as she grows up in two different worlds. Her home life and her school life.

Short story. I would love to hear your feedback and constructive criticism on improving my short story. Thank you :)

In 1996, A young man with a quiet life makes a strange discovery that alters his sense of reality; nothing makes sense, as he is somehow transported into the future- all...

Here I will upload ... Stories for school! never woulda guessed huh?

A short story I wrote as part of a transfer application into the Tisch School of the Arts. It's something I wrote a while ago and now that it's time for submission, I'm...

Murder Mystery. Part 3 done! Will add more soon. First piece, please give feedback NO HATE. ~Updated 1/1/17

-Mia: sweet, kind, unpopular -Toby:secertly likes Mia, kind, somewhat popular -Ryan: total badboy, popular. Mia fall in what she thinks is love with her best friend's en...

....I'm just spamming y'all sorry- {Might be deleted because of r e a s o n s} Just want some feedback on it-

just a series of random short stories and weird thoughts by me, the stories will mainly be fantasy and maybe a bit of horror here and there. if you do choose to read thi...

Shane Gastling must cross to the most dangerous part of his land to defeat an enemy more powerful than any, the Immortal Master. He must hurry, before the Master's army...

Hello! this is my first time sharing any of my poetry online. I usually keep my poetry private so yeaa. I am still learning to revise and make my pieces better s...

Note on this first part of my ultimate story and first piece, any of my writings are to be approached with an open mind and are made as 'food for thought', for it is you...

First it was the dreams. It's how he communicated with me. Now, it's more than dreams. And it's real. If I want to get out of this alive, do I trust him? Or do I trust...