Famous Ten

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Four is an international pop star and Tris is an average senior at school. Four trys to run away from the pap... Mer

chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
EPILOGUE
FINAL
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EPILOGUE PT.2

chapter 28

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Chapter 28: Tris's Day

TOBIAS POV

I wake up extra early and make Tris breakfast as well as myself. I get the gang. We decorate the place with balloons and I told them they could eat now. But when I send Zeke a text hide. Once I am done I see Tris stirring when I went into the room.

"Hey Babe," I say

"Hi," she mumbles

"Here," I say giving her the breakfast

"Thank you," she says than she snaps back. "Tobias you didn't have to do this,"

"Well, today I have planned to celebrate your first album," I say

"Oh Tobias, thank you so much," she says she gives me a kiss and finishes her breakfast than has a shower. When I hear the shower turn off I text Zeke.

4- HIDE

Zekey- KK..

Tris gets dressed and she walks to the living room.

"SURPRISE," the gang shout

"OMG, how are you guys here?" Tris asks "It's so good to see you guys,"

"Well, Four here told us to get on HIS jet, not to mention it is shittingly awesome and we are here now," Zeke says.

"Shittingly is not a word," Shauna says

"Whatever," Zeke mumbles

Tris hugs me so tight and I hug her back tightly.

"Four. I .. can't.. breathe," Tris whimpers

"Oh, sorry," I say letting her go.

"Well let's go sightseeing," Christina shouts.

We hop on the double-decker bus and go sightseeing LA.

ONE HOUR LATER

After this we have already seen Venice Beach, The Hollywood sign, Hollywood and other minor things. We hop off the bus at Universal Studios and I buy everyone a VIP pass for Universal Studios. We head all our own ways. Molly went with Christina and Will. Zeke, Uriah, Marlene and Shauna set off. Leaving me with Tris.

By 1pm we have already been on everything here. We meet the gang and took the metro to Venice Beach. It was really funny because everyone was staring at Tris and I with wide eyes. At Venice Beach we ate a late lunch and went 'beaching' and had a sand fight.

After that day we went back to the hotel. When Tris and I went back to our apartment Tris gave me a bone-crushing hug.

"Tobias, thank you for today, I really love you," Tris says.

She looks up at me as I look down at her. I kiss her passionately than say

"Don't thank me yet,"

I put on a white dress shirt, tie, jeans and a black leather jacket. I put on some black vans and see Tris.

TRIS POV

I have a shower and put on the very formal dress as I know that there will be people following me. It is a maxi dress. The dress has lace on the top and reveals a bit of cleavage . The bottom part is white and flowy. There is a slit traveling up on the left side. I put on the shiny gold belt and the white and gold stilettoes which I changed for the plain white ones. The stilettos are mostly white with an ombre fade turning into gold making the heel gold. I have nude lips and a sharp cat-liquid eyeliner. I walk out and see Tobias staring at me with his mouth wide open and eyes wide.

"Like what you see, aye" I ask

"Hell yes," he shouts.

I laugh and see the gang outside the guys practically all look the same and the girls look awesome.

Shauna is wearing a black lace short dress. There is dark blue silk topped over with black lace. It stops about mid-thigh and she has black stilettos and a black clutch. She has a smokey eye and lip gloss

Christina is wearing a black peplum dress. It is strapless and there is black mesh covering her stomach area. She has black sparkly stilettoes on and a black clutch as well. She also has a smokey eye and red lips

Molly is wearing a black and pale pink maxi dress. It is strapless and the top part has a zip at the front. The bottom part is pale pink and flowy. She has pale eyeshadow and pink lips

Marlene is wearing a cream one-shouldered dress with white stilettos and gold bangles on her wrist. She has cream eyeshadow with lip gloss.

We head off in a limo to the concert. We head back stage and I see Bruno and Tobais chatting with the gang fan girling/boying. I walk up to them.

"Hey Bruno, long time no see," I say

"Hey, Tris, what's up," he says

"Well, my lovely boyfriend here took me around LA and to celebrate my first album. He brought my friends over as well," I say pointing to them. The all wave

"There special," I whisper

Bruno and Tobias laugh.

3 HOURS LATER

After Bruno has performed his whole album the crowd cheer.

"Well, you guys thought I came here without a special guest?" Bruno says

The crowd cheers louder.

"Well, welcome my good friend, Four," he says

Tobias walks onto the stage. The crowd starts to cheer louder than ever before.

"Well, hello, long time no sing," Tobais says with his sexy voice. The crowd cheers.

"LET"S HEAT IT UP FOR MY NEW SONG," Tobias shouts.

The music starts

What would I do without your smart mouth?
Drawing me in, and you kicking me out
You've got my head spinning, no kidding, I can't pin you down
What's going on in that beautiful mind
I'm on your magical mystery ride
And I'm so dizzy, don't know what hit me, but I'll be alright

My head's under water
But I'm breathing fine
You're crazy and I'm out of my mind

Tobias is looking at me. Before I knew it he was walking towards me and takes my hand. I step out behind the curtin. The crowd whistles and cheers.

'Cause all of me
Loves all of you
Love your curves and all your edges
All your perfect imperfections
Give your all to me
I'll give my all to you
You're my end and my beginning
Even when I lose I'm winning
'Cause I give you all of me
And you give me all of you, oh

Tobis gives me a spin and I twirl. He places his hand around my waist.

How many times do I have to tell you
Even when you're crying you're beautiful too
The world is beating you down, I'm around through every mood
You're my downfall, you're my muse
My worst distraction, my rhythm and blues
I can't stop singing, it's ringing, in my head for you

My head's under water
But I'm breathing fine
You're crazy and I'm out of my mind

'Cause all of me
Loves all of you
Love your curves and all your edges
All your perfect imperfections
Give your all to me
I'll give my all to you
You're my end and my beginning
Even when I lose I'm winning
'Cause I give you all of me
And you give me all of you, oh

Give me all of you
Cards on the table, we're both showing hearts
Risking it all, though it's hard

'Cause all of me
Loves all of you
Love your curves and all your edges
All your perfect imperfections
Give your all to me
I'll give my all to you
You're my end and my beginning
Even when I lose I'm winning
'Cause I give you all of me
And you give me all of you

I give you all of me
And you give me all of you, oh

At the end I give Tobias a kiss.

"Well, I guess I have another guest here.." Bruno says

The crowd starts to chant. SING SING SING.

I nod and get tossed a microphone. I connect it to my ear and I start..

R.I.P. to the girl you used to see
Her days are over, baby she's over
I decided to give you all of me
Baby come closer, baby come closer

I sing as I catwalk to him

TOBIAS:
Sexy senorita, I feel your aura
Jump out that new motor
Get in my flying saucer
I'll make you call me daddy
Even though you ain't my daughter
Baby I ain't talking books
When I say that I can take you across the borders
I'm young and free, I'm London G
I'm tongue in cheek
So baby give me some time to drink
Slow and steady for me
Go on like a jezzy for me
And say the words soon as you're ready for me

I swing my hips as he raps

TRIS:
I'm ready for ya
Hit 'em all, switch it up
Put 'em on, zip it up
Let my perfume, soak into your sweater
Say you'll be here soon, sooner the better
No option for, you saying no
I run this game, just play a role
Follow my lead, what you waiting for?
Thought it over and decided tonight is your night

I grind onto him with him kissing my neck softly

Ca-a-an you fe-e-el my He-he-he-he-heart is beatin'
Ca-a-an you fe-e-el my He-he-he-he-heart is beatin'

I wrap my hands around his neck and wrap my lag around his waist

R.I.P. to the girl you used to see
Her days are over, baby she's over
(I-I-I'm ready for ya)
I decided to give you all of me
Baby come closer, baby come closer
(I-I-I'm ready for ya)

I untangle myslef from him and strut around him

Nothing on, I strut around
I do it big, I shut it down
I wonder if you'll be able to handle me
Mental pictures, no cameras please.

With that I cover my face with my hand

Ca-a-an you fe-e-el my He-he-he-he-heart is beatin'
Ca-a-an you fe-e-el my He-he-he-he-heart is beatin'

R.I.P. to the girl you used to see
Her days are over, baby she's over
(I-I-I'm ready for ya)
I decided to give you all of me
Baby come closer, baby come closer
(I, I, I'm ready for ya)

I tug onto Tobias's tie than shove him away smirking

Yeah I hear you talking
Don't know who you trying to flatter
Got my mind made up (I, I, I'm ready for ya)
I'm in control, but with you being a man,
You don't seem to understand (I, I, I'm ready for ya)
I, I, I'm ready for ya
I, I, I'm ready for ya
So keep thinking you the man
Cause it's all part of my plan
I, I, I'm ready for ya

Ca-a-an you fe-e-el my He-he-he-he-heart is beatin'
Ca-a-an you fe-e-el my He-he-he-he-heart is beatin'

R.I.P. to the girl you used to see
Her days are over...

I finish with the crowd cheering. We all bow and get off the stage. Our friends are cheering.

We arrive back at our apartment and ordered pizza.

After all of that we sit in a circle for no reason.

"Well, seeing as we are in a circle how about present!" Zeke shouts

"Oh, you guys didn't have to get me presents," I say

"Come on Tris, it's your first album," Christina says

"Okay," I say

First off was Zeke and Shauna. There was a $100 card for Forever 21 from Shauna and a packet of condoms from Zeke.

"Really Zeke?" I ask with the packet in my hand

"Yeah, there are about 10 of them in there," he says

I glare at him.

"Whaattt, you guys just do it a lot," Zeke says

We all laugh including me and Tobias.

"Thanks Shauna," I say. Zeke just pouts and I roll my eyes.

Next is from Christina and Will. Christina gave me a pair of leopard print Vans. Will gave me a massive candle

"Thanks guys," I say group-hugging Chrissy and Will.

I get a summer dress from Molly, a hot chocolate pack from Marlene and shirt saying I ship Fourtris from Uriah. I laugh at the shirt.

I thank all of them. I was about to tell them that I was heading to bed.

"Wait, I have a gift for you," Tobias says

"Four, don't you think you have given me enough? My friends are now in LA, we went sightseeing and you sang a song for me in a Bruno Mars concert," I say

"Nup," Tobias says popping the p.

He hands me a box with black wrapping paper and blue ribbon around it.

I open the gift and I gasp.

"Holy shit, is it what I think it is?" I ask

"Yep, your first copy of you whole album," Tobias says.

I look at the cover with a picture of me, ME. I was wearing a exotic gold crop top and tight black pants on tall gold heels. I was on a glass made catwalk with my hands out to the side pushing walls away. I had a side shot of my face. The words underneath was my album name. Hardships. The i was blue as the other words were black. I love the album name.

"I-I-I love it," I say. I kiss Tobias passionately and pull away. Inside was a CD and an auto-graph of Tobias on the CD. I laugh. He had a message ontop.

To your first album,Tris
Four/Tobias

I sign the disk as well with a sharpie saying.

To my first album, Tobias
Beatrice/Tris

I open the other thing. It was a necklace with a heart locket. And on the heart it had a T. I smile as Tobais puts it on.

"Wow, Four you did good," Zeke says

I laugh.

"Anyway, I was going to say we should head back it's one in the morning," I say. They all agree as we head to our rooms.

"I love you Tris," Tobias says

"I love you Tobias and thank you for the amazing day, I don't deserve you," I say

"What do you mean, I am the one who doesn't deserve you," Tobas says.

"Tobias, I am not pretty or curvy, you are able to get any girl in this world and I am lucky enough that you chose me," I say

"Tris, your beautiful, selfless, brave, kind and amazing, what dd I do to deserve you," Tobias says

"You stole my heart," I say

We fell asleep with that...

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