I'll Wait Forever

Da twisted_transistor

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Frank has always been an outcast. At school, at home, even just walking down the street. He's a nobody- and h... Altro

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Chapta 9 y'all.
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Da twisted_transistor

Hey sorry for another a/n, but I had a couple questions for those reading this.

So I told you I went back and reread this book, and as its progressed I feel like my writing has really improved from when I started. That being said, I know a lot of the first chapters were pretty rough and I rushed through a lot of plot points and my timeline wasn't perfect, so would you guys want me to go back and rewrite the beginning chapters? I wouldn't change any of the plot or take out any references, I'd just probably make them longer if possible and phrase them better and maybe stretch out the story a bit. Thoughts?

If you think I should rewrite them, should it be before or after I finish this book?

And again if I rewrote them, should I keep it as a majority of first person? I probably would but I want you guy's input

OK THANKS FOR READING THIS LONG NOTE. PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR THOUGHTS :D also I love you guys and thanks for reading this and sticking with me :3

Merci pour le venin...

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