hey! if you're going to read this, please do take a minute to reflect on your actions. this story is crap. really. ((But if you wanna read a better version, click the external link))
let me have a brief introduction about the flaws in this story:
a. emoticons
b. epic fail humor (and some drama at the end)
c. some plotholes (not that noticeable)
d. author was included as a character in this story, problem?
e. informal writing
f. mapanghard na lines
g. cusses
h. complicated plot ((but i assure you, it's actually good. not just this day))
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sorry to those guys complaining about my writing style. I. AM. NOT. A WRITER. it's not like that i did not undergo this freaking amature style of writing. i am not a pro when i began writing and this was my first novel. plus, those readers that were so dumb that they would complain that this story's rubbish, then better slap yourself with your monitor to feel the intensity of this note.
Oh well. why am I explaining?
go. read.