ABHIRA

By writerishu

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PROLOGUE
A PROPOSAL & PAST
AN APOLOGY
MRS.BIRLA & MR.GOENKA
CONFESSION
WE ARE HAPPY FOR YOU
I WON'T SACRIFICE
PROLOGUE
I AM YOURS
SEAS OF BITTERSWEET TRUTHS
I WON'T PITY ON YOU
MISSION ABHIMANYU
WASN'T YOUR LOVE CONDITIONAL??
EPILOGUE
A HAND OF HELP
SHOWING YOUR PLACE
SOME TALKS
AN APOLOGY??
ENGAGEMENT
NOT AN UPDATE πŸ˜—
THE AKSHARA WE WANT
DROP THE SUGGESTIONS OVER HERE
WHAT IS WRONG WITH HER
YOU CAN'T SEPRATE THEM
BOND
COVERS.
MENDING RELATIONS
ENOUGH NOW
THE DATE
A NOTE OF THANK YOU
TRUTH
DIVORCE TRACK
NEVER ENDING
LONG TIME NO SEE..
PREGNANCY-I
PREGNANCY-II
PREGNANCY - III
NOT AN UPDATE
PROLOGUE..
POV..
PAINFUL PAST
CASE
FACING THE PAST
KNOWING THE TRUTH
AKSHARA
GIVING IT BACK
AKSHARA'S WORDS
ABHIMANYU'S WORDS...
A FAMILY
YRKKH
A BATTLE
A BATTLE - II
A BATTLE - III
A BATTLE - IV
A BATTLE - V
HELP ME OUT!!
A BATTLE - VI
A BATTLE - VII
A BATTLE - VIII
A BATTLE - IX
A BATTLE - X
A MOMENT TO THANK YOU ALL
MAAT KARO EHSAAN
SUGGESTIONS..
ABHIMANYU
A LOSS
REPLACED & GUILT
lets get connected
A PROBLEM
A REALITY CHECK
A REALITY CHECK - II
A REALITY CHECK - FINAL
VOTE
ABHIRA
ABHIRA - II
ABHIRA - III(FINAL)
RUHI
VOTE
CHECK OUT
KARMA WORKS
NEW STORY
UPSET???
AAYE HAYE MEIN MARJAWA

CHOTU SHERNI

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By writerishu

2nd UPDATE OF TODAY. PLEASE HIT THE STAR BUTTON AND COMMENT YOUR VIEWS❣️.

I WILL CONTINUE FROM MY LAST UPDATE AS WELL.
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I AM LITERALLY PISSED OFF SEEING MANISH GOENKA. WHAT THE HELL IS HE UPTO?? HE SAYS HE IS AKSHU'S GUARDIAN BUT HE CAN'T UNDERSTAND HER PAIN HER LOVE?? WHY?? AT FIRST THE CONFUSION WAS BECAUSE OF SWARNA MIMI AND MANJIRI. SECONDLY THEY TOLD THAT THEY KNEW WHO ABHI WANT. AND THIRDLY NOW THEY ARE AFTER HIM FOR EVERYTHING. WHY??

UGH AND NOT A SINGLE PLOT IS UTILIZED PROPERLY. IT SEEMS LIKE MAKERS ARE JUST MOVING AHEAD WITH PLOTS. RATHER THAN REVEALING TRUTHS. EVERYONE SEES AKSHU'S FAULT EVERYTIME BUT NOT OF THAT AAROHI. WHY??
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MANISH - lejaiye inspector sahab isse

AKSHU (runs towards Abhi) - nahi inspector ismey Abhi ki galti nahi hain (she slips)

ABHI (jerks away Inspector hand) - Akshuuu (holds Akshu)

INSPECTOR - teri itni himmat ki tune on duty officer par haat uthaya

AKSHU - Nahi sir

INSPECTOR TAKES AWAY ABHI. AKSHU BURST OUT IN TEARS. KAIRAV CONSOLES HER.

MANISH (calmly) - Akshara chalo aandar

AKSHU (murmers) - Nahi nahi chalungi mein aandar mujhe Abhi k pas jana hain

MANISH (in little loud tone) - Akshara meine kaha aandar chalo

AKSHU (loudly) - Aur meine bhi kaha mein Abhi k pas jarahi hu (walks towards gate)

MANISH (angrily) - agar tumne iss ghar se bahar kadam rakha toh hamara tumse koi rista nahi hoga

AKSHU - mera aaplogo se rista kab tha

EVERYONE LOOKS AT HER.

AKSHU (looking at everyone) - Boliye na Mr.Goenka mera aap k sath rista kab tha.

KAIRAV - Akshu tu kya kehrahi hain yeh sab

AKSHU - Please bhaiya aaj mujhe bolne dijey

MANISH - Kehna kya chahti ho tum

AKSHU (taking a deep breath) - Mein aaplogo ki kuch lagti bhi hu kya Mr.Goenka. Mujhe toh nahi lagta ki mein aaplogo ki kuch lagti hu. Bachpan se leke aajtak meine dard aur dukh k alawa paya kya hain iss ghar mey. 10 saal 10 saal meine usse maa kaha jo meri maa thihi nahi. Meri maa ki jikar tak xoddiye unka naam tak nahi liya jata tha iss ghar mey kyu.

EVERYONE LOOKS AT EACH OTHER

AKSHU - Meri maa Naira k bare mey ekbar bhi kisine jikar kiya unn 10 saalo mey nahi kisine nahi. Jab mujhe pata chala ki meri maa Naira mumma thi tab bhi meine unhe aur Sirat mumma ko ek barabar pyaar kiya kabhi unhe soteli maa nahi samjha. Jab Aarohi ko yeh baat pata chali toh uski behaviour mey indifference aaye lekin aap sab ne kya kaha Akshu Aaru choti hain tum badi ho tum samajdar banjao. Sirf ek saal badi thi mein Aarohi se sirf ek saal (Akshu yelled at top of her voice)

Maa sirf Aarohi ne nahi meine bhi khoyi thi lekin sab ne mujhe paraya kardiya kyu kyuki mein so called badi thi. Kya ek saal bada hona itna bada paap hogaya tha. Aarohi bar bar mujhe maa ko leke ya kisi na kisi bahane nicha dikhati thi lekin tab bhi aaplogo ne usse kuch nahi kaha. Agar iski yeh jidd aur jalan ki koi jimmedar hain na toh woh aap sab ho. Yeh hamesa mujhse meri chize leti thi tab bhi aaplogo ne iska sath diya isse badawa diya kyu kyuki yeh choti thi huh mere bhi sapne thye meri bhi khwaise thi jo hamesa aaplog badi ho samajdar banjao ban k khuchal dete thye

Meine aajtak bahot suna ki badi ho samajdar banjao lekin aab aur nahi sunsakti mein. Isne mujhe hamesa Sirat mumma ki mout ko leke blame kiya lekin aap mey se kisi ek ne bhi isse rokne ki kosis ki nahi ki kyu kyuki aap iski jidd aur jalan ko bachpana samajte rahe aur mein issi ummed mey rehgai ki kabhi toh mujhe meri Aaru milegi lekin aajse mein woh ummed bhi todti hu.

Aap sab mujhe ghar aane ko kehte rahe lekin kya kabhi aap mey se koi mujhe hak se lene aaya nahi aaye. Kya aapmey se kabhi kisine janna chaha ki mein wapas kyu nahi aana chahti thi nahi. Aap sab ko pata tha kahi na kahi mere wapas na aane ki wajha Aarohi thi tab bhi aaplogo ne isse nahi samjhaya mujhe wapas bulane k liye. Bahot beti beti kehte hain na aap sab mujhe toh jab iss ghar ki beri 3 saal tak ghar se durr thye kya aapmey se koi ekbar bhi mujhse milne aaya nahi aaye aakhir aate bhi kyu aapke pas aapni topper honhar beti jo thi.

Mujhe bhi aap sab k saath rehna kah maan karta tha lekin Aarohi ki kadwi baatein aap sab kah uske bartav ko leke ignorance hamesa mujhe wapas aane se rokdeti thi. Aap sab hamesa se isse jyada pyaar aur prefer karte thye kyuki yeh toh Goenkas ki topper beti hain na aur mein ek failure..

(Looking at Aarohi)Maa khone kah dard sirf tujhe nahi mujhe bhi huwa tha Aarohi, papa meine bhi khoyi thi lekin usse jyada dard mujhe tab huwa jab tu barbar mujhe mumma ki mout k liye blame karti thi. Meine tere liye aapni family xoddiya lekin tab bhi tera jalan kaam nahi huwa, tere khushi k liye meine aapna pyaar tak kurban kardiya tab bhi tujhe mujhse problem hoti rahi. Tu bata aab mein kya tere liye duniya xoddu

MIMI (with moist eyes) - nahi Akshu yesa maat kaho tum hamari Naira aur kittu ki aakhri nisaani ho

AKSHU - Aapko pata bhi hain ki mein aapki Naira aur Kittu ki aakhri nisaani hu hain na Mimi aur aap sabko iss aakhri nisaani ki khushi ki jarasa bhi parwa nahi hain na (chuckels)

MANISH - Akshara dekho Abhi

AKSHU - haa kahiye na bade papa aur kya dekhu. Bachpan se Aarohi ki nafrat aur jalan toh dekhti aarahi hu aaj aapne pariwar k maan mey aapne pyaar k liye kitni nafrat hain woh bhi dekhliya aur kuch bacha hain dekhne ko

MANISH - Abhimanyu sahi ladka nahi hain beta samaj kyu nahi rahi ho

AKSHU (shouts) - aap kyu nahi samaj rahe hain ki mein aur Abhi ekdusre se pyaar karte hain. Aarohi k liye Abhimanyu sahi hosakta tha lekin mere liye nahi kyu kyuki issbar khushi Aarohi k nahi meri jholi mey aai hain

MANISH JUST SIGHED. EVERYONE FEELS THE MATTER GOING WORSE.

AKHIL - Akshu dekhi beta pehle woh rista leke aaya kiske liya laya woh bhi nahi batay

AKSHU (looking at Akhil) - kyuki usse batane nahi diya gaya aap sabne toh kehdiya tha na ki aap jante hain ki rista kiske liye hain. Agar ussdin aap sab usse naam lene dete toh baat wohi clear hojati itni confusion hotihi nahi.

SWARNA - Lekin beta woh baad mey rista Aaru k liye bhi leke aaya na

AKSHU - Woh isliye kyuki Manjiri aunty ki tabiyaat kharab bhi thi. Abhi ne unki khushi k liye Aarohi se shaadi k liye haa ki thi

MANISH - fhir bhi mujhe woh ladka sahi nahi lagta

AKSHU - aapko sahi lagega bhi nahi afterall aapko aapne ego k aage kuch dikhai kaha deta hain

KAIRAV - Akshuu bas kar beta

AKSHU - haa bas kar rahi hu bhaiya aap bas hogaya hain aap se None of you will decide ki mein kya karungi aur kya nahi. Aabse Akshara wohi karegi jo usse sahi lagega

AKSHARA WAS ABOUT TO STEP OUT WHEN MANISH GRABS HER HAND AND PULLS HER INSIDE

MANISH (loudly) - ekbar kehdiya na tum uss ladke se milne nahi jaogi toh nahi jaogi

AKSHU (yells) - kyu kyu nahi jasakti mein Abhi se milne. Jab Aarohi ne aapse Abhimanyu k bare mey baat ki tab aap sab Aarohi ki khushi k liye mangaye lekin aab jab Abhi aur mein ekdusre se pyaar karte hain toh aap hamare pyaar ki dushman kyu bane huye hain. Kya Abhi se pyaar karna meri galti hain?? Kya Aarohi ki khatir chup rahi yeh meri galti hain?? Aarohi ki khushi aur usse dubara aapne Aaru banana chahti thi yeh meri galti hain?? Ya Kairav bhaiya k kehne par mein wapas nahi gai yeh meri galti thi?? Aarohi k barbar mujhe aapni maa k mout k liye blame karke mujhe mentally harass karti thi tab kyu nahi bole aap sab?? Aarohi jidd karke sab pana janti hain lekin mein nahi yeh meri galti hain kya?? Aap sab mujhe kis baat ki saja derahi hain??

Mujhe ussidin Naira mumma k sath marjana chaiye tha aaj meri wajha se Abhi itni takleef mey toh nahi hota.

THE TEARS AKSHU WAS HOLDING LONG BACK COMES OUT. AKSHU FALLS DOWN ON HER KNEES

KAIRAV - chal Akshu Abhimanyu k bail karwane

AKSHU LIFTS HER FACE. KAIRAV GENTLY WIPES HER TEARS.

KAIRAV - Abhimanyu tujhe yese nahi dekh payega beta shaant hoja

AKSHU NODES AND STANDS UP.

EVERYONE ELSE JUST LOOKS AT THEM LEAVING....

SO TELL ME GUYS SHOULD I CONTINUE WITH THIS PART??

IF YES WHAT DO YOU WANNA SEE AHEAD??

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