Erudite

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I take the train to get there and get to where I last saw my mom. No ones there. This is where I start to panic, what if she already killed them. I run to where I think Jeanine's office is. There they are.. I start feeling relieved Jeanine isn't there. This is my chance to get them out. I run in and hug my mom. I hear footsteps coming towards us. I run and hide in the closet. My mom and dad are standing where they were before I came in. Jeanine walks into the room. She started to talk to my parents and tie them to tables. She says that she has guards looking in dauntless for me, to bring me back here to kill my parents in front of me, then killing me after them. She laughs at my parents and leaves the room. I slowly get out of the closet, taking a gun out of my pocket. I get a knife on the counter and cut my parents free. I tell them to leave me here. But they refused. I hear footsteps coming again. I run into the hallway and shoot and I feeling something has hit me. That was the last thing I saw until everything was black

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Sorry I didn't write more, can someone tell me if I should continue the story or end it???
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