Blue Star Contest 2019 [Closed]

Entry-3 (Judges Review)

Entry- 3
Team: Imperfect Perfectionists
Summer by nishuayyar
Autumn by Frreebird
Rainy by dazzling_thorn
Winter by ff_naam
Spring by Mansigupta22

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Review by birdy_without_wings

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1) A quick dip

Title: 4/5
Title is good one. It goes well with both theme and story.

Creativity: 8/10
Framation: 7.8/10
The plot is unique yet true. As u show the negative impact also. So, it's interesting.

Grammar: 7.4/10
There are a lot of mistakes in punctuation and sentence framation. It needs editing dear.

Use of words: 2/5
The is the criteria where story lacks a bit

Total: 29.2/40

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2) Our sweet little meeting

Title: 4/5
A perfect title for plot. It's also go along theme or you can say u make it to go along.

Creativity: 9.2/10
Framation: 8/10
The entire plot is just awsm. The way you construct it is unique and sweet. The love between them and the questioning quote is very nice. It feels so real while reading it. We normally read the love quotations of the sun and the moon. But the feelings of snow and autumn is quite new and lovely.

Grammar: 8.6/10
Grammar is pretty good. Just little bit errors in punctuation.

Use of words: 4/5
You did a good job in this criteria.

Total: 33.8/40

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3) As the drops rub away the scars

Title: 3.5/5
Title is good according to the story line. It represents both theme and story well. But the attractiveness towards story through title is missing

Creativity 7.6/10
Framation: 7.5/10
The way of presentation is good. Surely you put great efforts in it. Putting every emotion in words is tough but u did it. May be it stand on the theme but still, the concept is common one.

Grammar: 9/10
Grammar is good. No visual mistakes in it.

Use of words: 2.5/5
It's smooh reading with simple words.

Total: 30.1/40

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4) Magical crystals

Title 4.3/5
Title is pretty much good and attractive. It goes well with both theme and story. So, title is perfect.

Creativity 8.1/10
Framation: 8/10
The plot is really good. The desire of watching the every bit of winter is unique.
Mentioning the place at the top is good. It makes a view in mind.

Grammar: 9.3/10

Use of words: 3.3/5
Little bit ignorance in this criteria.

Total: 33/40

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5) A newfangled life

Title 4.6/5
A perfect title for the plot. Also beautiful one.
As yes! Spring is something which gives birth to new hopes.