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So this a little rant and I'm sorry for it but I'm angry.

Okay so I completely understand why so many people are upset or mad at me for removing my previous book series. I know that so many of you guys liked it but it was full of a variety of faults.

I originally wrote the series when I was fourteen meaning my writing was poor and throughout the years, I've struggled to completely reshaped the books to the way I like it.

So here's why I did what I did and removed the books.

1. Kyle rapes Lia, obviously when I was younger writing these I didn't fully understanding what I was writing but after recently reading it myself I can see the faults.

Yes there's no completely accusation of Kyle raping Lia in the book but it was when they first sleep together because he gets her drunk and takes advantage of that, she was in no mindset to consent.

2. The story is too unrealistic.

The previous series was cliche and I knew that but in some aspects it just didn't make any sense. Like how Kyle and Lia don't experience any financial problems with the baby, or that people come after Lia, since I didn't completely explain how Kyle was involved with dangerous things.

3. The book was set in America.

At the time, I normally read the cliche teen romance high school stories that were set in America, so I based my book off that.

But I realised that, that was a stupid idea because I don't understand or know the education system in American since I'm from England.

4. The books themselves were just too much.

I overloaded the books with too many throws of dramas and problems, it wasn't relatable.

So they're the reasons why I unpublished and decided to change these books. I understand that people fell in love with the stories but my newer version is much alike the original.

I am using the template of my original chapters when writing my new ones, so they are similar.

And I've changed the characters because the original people who I saw the characters as are now too old to be seen as teenagers.

For example Chris Wood, who I saw Kyle as, is thirty and I couldn't have him as a face for an eighteen year old.

That's about all I have to say at the minute but I have the old chapters saved, shown in image above. Yet I'm hoping that people won't miss them as much and will fall in love with this new version.

I might upload the old chapters again, I'm not too sure but no time soon so do not message about it.

I am getting to a breaking point with some of you. Please stop messaging me privately and commenting on my newer chapters that you want the old book back because it's not coming back any time soon.

I understand a lot of you adored the love between Kyle and Lia but is also with Lee and Zac because it's the same basis I'm using.

And if people are just complaining and not giving this new version a chance, then you will just have to face facts. I'm sorry.

I created these characters, these books and this story and I just thought that more people would understand and respect my decision for wanting to change them for the better.

And the reason why some characters are removed is because I couldn't handle so many people to include.

Besides the plot is the same with a few changes to help me write it better.

And I do deeply apologies to those who were half way through reading a book but trust me when I say that it's for the better.

That's all I have to say right now.

- georgia

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