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Some are in portuguese but I'll try to translate cuz I really wanna post it here exactly how I left them 😁
THANK YOU ALL AGAIN

Comment what you think about them and if you remember in which scenes they happened 😉

They are not chronologically ordered. I just had ideas and wrote them down haha

And this is only for COMPLETE THE INCOMPLETE

[ ] - I didn't do it
[x] - I did it

- [x] The bun while spooning bc of the hair on his face. (Neal told her he didn't like it, so she presumes he doesn't too)
[this was really the first idea I had for this fic... went from so little to so much]

- [x] Neal and Gideon are drug dealers

- [x] END IT WITH A "WHATS THE NEWS, MRS JONES?" OH DAMN COLIFER

- [ ] Emma's contact lenses start to melt
[this one was supposed to be on the fire haha]

- [x] Killian sees his mother crying in their marriage

- [x] Make an emotional daddy-daughter opening of the chap (MAKE THEM THINK DAVIDS GONNA DIE MHUAHAHA)

- [ ] He cries when she's rescued

- [ ] She comforts him at night, his head on her chest. He's lost Liam. Everyone he loved. He can't lose her too.

- [ ] Next chap starts with Killian calling Elsa and Jefferson

- [x] Emma tells her parents she and Killian are together

- [x] When Emma goes to buy her baby daughter's crib, a guy named Walsh flirts with her

- [x] Henry draws on Killian's back.

- [x] She's working rlly hard now bc shes the sheriff and she goes to his bed at like 2am

- [ ] Epilogue: they're on their way to the hospital. He's driving. A contraction hits her and she's squeezes her fingers around the holder of the car door, her wedding ring sparkling.

- [x] She kisses him and the red of her Rudolph red nose gets him with red sharpie on his cheek

- [x] Don't forget about baby Neal
[I just had to keep writing this because it's so easy to forget him and Buckley jfc 😂😂😂]

- [x] They have to wonder in the silent school BEFORE the show bc Mary Margaret will be giving birth during the play and Emma and Killian will be the ones taking care of everything

- [x] Mary margaret asks if they could go to the school (the school they attended) and play santa claus and an elf. Emma teases MM about her belly

- [x] David brings Henry to watch the play. And then takes him home when it ends. Emma and Killian take a bus like old times after going for a walk on their old deserted school and remember where they first met.

- [x] Henry takes a photo with Killian as Santa

- [x] Labio mordido - nervosa
[bitten lip - nervous (EMMA)]

- [ ] He goes to Neal to defend emma (threatens him)

- [x] He teaches how to cook to her

- [x] Doctor appointment cuz something is wrong (considering on having Emma not able to have any more kids) and that night Rose has dinner there for the first time

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