Name: Ty Wilson [Brother of BJ] (who is BJ? Obviously his brother but still, little depth of brother BJ)
Age: 16 (young)
Human
Hair colour: Hazel chocolate (interesting)
Eye colour: emerald (is overused, there are so many different forms of green it's absolutely amazing, google shades of green, I can't promise you won't find a porno)
Clothes: bandana, black tee, plaid jacket w/ hood, choker, gloves (that's an awful lot, but okay)
Weight: 70 kg (pretty small for his age)(malnutrition? That could affect his fighting abilities)
Height: 5'6
Background:
He lived with the grief of losing his brother and the death of his parents, he goes on a search for his brother only to have him mutilate his fingers. (Work on this, I'm confused, who mutilated who's fingers?)
Weapon: poison in a spray can (well where did he even get this? I would suggest using something else)
Weapon 2: Swiss Army knife
Shipped with: no one
Alrighty, you left out a huge amount of his personal background, from what I see he's an emotionless teenage boy with eating problems and magical poison, where is he from? What kind of life did he have? Who killed his family? Don't leave out too much my friend
Again, was never given a name so, you know who you are! If you want to stay anon I understand
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