Intro!

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Hi! My names Hailey! I'm a 16 year old female with curly brown hair and green eyes (kinda green with a splash of brown in the middle to be specific) I'm 5'2, slightly chubby, and love music! Oh mah God!

No! Don't start your book like this! Start it more like;
I ran down the street in panic, my brown hair flying all over my face
My icy green eyes stained red from the wind whipping through it, My lungs burned with the fact I barely exercise. who was I running from?
I don't know. But he wanted me dead.
"Hailey! Run to me!" My brother shouted from the open door ahead of me

See? Not as shitty! Not as cliche!
Keep it creative, imagine like you were starting a movie, that couldn't have a narrater as fabulous as Morgan freeman.
Bam, just throw those amazing fucking readers into a crazy plot leaving them excited but, not confused, get what I mean?
Look this is just an intro so I'm not gonna go on and on for 50 more pages
Just get creative
(Screams in the corner at the reference)

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