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Hey guys! I know it has been a while, but I am never going to update this book again. I thought I would share how I planned this book to end.

First off, I was going to make Noah an actual likable character who was obsessed with Vanessa and not an actual dick. It would be a slow burn and the second to last chapter would be them finally together.

However, the last chapter at the very end you would find out that Noah was actually driving the car that killed Beth. It would end on a cliffhanger.

Anyways, looking back at this story I am disappointed in myself. I hate how toxic I made Noah. I hate how Vanessa is a pick me at some times. I hate how drastically messed up I made the characters family lives.

I want to apologize for never finishing this, but at least I thought I would share how I wanted this to end.

If I were to write a new story now I would def make the main male like so nice and amazing like Prince Eric in the new Little Mermaid.

Thank you for all the support!
-J

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⏰ Last updated: May 31, 2023 ⏰

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