Sorry for all that are invested in this story I know this was a liked book but I won't lie I didn't like it mostly because the books first chapters are very rock and feel incomplete and the later chapters got bit chaotic, I wanted to restart this book cause truly I loved the character of Astral but felt I could do better.
Astral didn't have much back story due to the bad beginning chapters and it felt his relationship with Porco was developing too quickly and reach its highest half way through.
I want to try and weaken Astral after he gains the founding titans power and if prefer he slowly unlocks this power which is what I will be doing in the remake.
Some chapters will be similar cause I do believe there are some great moments in this book that could be reused (levi squad fight) and so they will return.
I'd like to thank you all and let you know the first chapter is already out ready to be read if you want but I wouldn't blame you if you decide not to.
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The founding child(discontinued being remade (attack on Titan) (Porco X Male Oc)
FanfictionHello anyone who is interested in this book sadly I discontinued it due to dissatisfaction on my side, so I have restarted this book to try and improve on the parts I hated. I do not own the cover and it can be found on Pinterest this is a version o...
