before you start

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Ok so this was my first dnf fic I have ever written and it really shows. There are some areas I really like and some that I really despise.

For one, I wrote George and Dream as terrible people and then played it off like it was nothing, not realizing that they were both being quite manipulative to those around them and to each other.

However, I believe the end scene is very cute, I like how I introduced the characters and generally think I kept the atmosphere as I wanted it to be.

So, sorry if it ends up cringing and you kind of hate them by the end, I don't blame you, my younger self was very impulsive and wanted to create all the drama.

I promise it's not that bad, you'll see when you get there.

Enjoy :)

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