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chapter 1
mel's single mom is a maid at a wealthy family's mansion
ex max
block his ass already
very much spice
well written first chapter
good grammar and spelling
no complaints from me :)

chapter 2
caramel-headed guy that sounds delish
his name is kai 😏
and he has silver-grey eyes
melanie angel gonzález sounds spanish
he do be checking her out
mel is 19 and kai is "about" 22
master? chile anyways
room- suite um who's gonna tell her?
mellie
sit or your mom will need to send you to church what the fawk 🤠
the room is filled with sexual tension
"you're sexually frustrated, aren't you?"

chapter 3
kai kingston and daddy kingston
narrow financials? do people even say that it sounds too formal
a full scholarship? hmm sounds fishy on what terms?
"this is my family's territory" ↴

he's holding her hand
showing her his mini library
he has a brother
paolo coelho's adultery *smirks*
kitten 🐱
he got a boner
they're sucking faces and "devoured each other"
he tasted like sweet vanilla and strawberry? i thought he would be caramel-flavored
he wants to read erotica with her because he can't finish alone 😉

chapter 4
mel's got auburn hair and blue eyes
computer science nice
my left choice?
honey
why is he there and why is he touching her?
somebody's got anger problems
dark blonde guy, brunette girl with pale skin
ryan martinez and massie williams
so mel is half latina and ryan full latino

chapter 5
woah they all sound so smart ryan- computer engineer massie- artificial intelligence kai- business intelligence 🤓
very possessive, confident, and snobby
again with paolo's book *blushes*
and he kisses her again against a wall
is it getting hot in here or is it just me?
aren't they in a public library
yay! she blocked the ex you go, girl!

chapter 6
kai dressed so fancy basically looking like a snack
and she agrees to meet him in the library
really not a fan of kitty/kitten
they're kissing again *smirks*
she felt his "third leg"
very very much spice
ofc someone interrupts probably his mom

chapter 7
why is she waiting? i would go to my room
you want to stop it only now? that's never going to happen miss girl
"i'm not allowed to disclose that" so formal
ugh just tell us where he was
they had dinner there and massie likes kai
"i'd like to keep that private" again, so formal
darling, i like that it's so british 💁‍♀️

chapter 8
mm daddy kingston is sus
oh his name is kenneth
"personal problems" hmm
aw girl don't cry
when she said a class below yours i thought she meant someone younger 🙈
the brother's name is kevin

chapter 9
he locked her in a kitchen why is that funny to me
i don't know if i already said this but that's nice of him not exposing her situation
yeah not everything is about you mel
they're arguing and now kissing
that's not a goodbye kiss *rolls eyes*
as long as she doesn't use ryan to make kai jealous or some stupid love triangle, i'm happy
ryan is kind of a stalker yeah
that's probably kevin
kai's gf? hmm i wonder if kai said something to him
and its kevin everybody

chapter 9he locked her in a kitchen why is that funny to mei don't know if i already said this but that's nice of him not exposing her situation yeah not everything is about you melthey're arguing and now kissingthat's not a goodbye kiss *rolls ey...

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