Title: Hidden Away
Author: CandyCrystalxxx
Rating: 8.9/10
Status: Work in Progress
Authors Description: She's a girl with a sad, secretive past. He's a guy with a broken life. And they're the only ones who can read past the other's façade. So they' re obviously meant for each other, right? However, Sopheila and Jabez's respective pasts build a barrier between them. Can they face their past and find their future with each other?
My Thoughts:
Fantastic, perfect descriptions, tones, cliffhangers, it had everything I expect from a book. This had what I wanted to read and just loved every second of it. But i noticed tiny errors like spelling and wrong use of grammar in certain aread by they weren't noticeable till I read over your story for a second time. Also the other thing is that it gets very confusing throughout the book and remember the more confusing it gets the more readers detach from the book. Keep that in mind and good work. I would have given you a higher rating but as I read further in the book i felt more 'detached' so sorry.
Pointers to Audience:
- Check it out if your into romance novels and have high expectations when it comes to books.
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