10,000 paper stars, one wish, and one mysterious boy....
Wish my cat was like that. All she does is bite my pencil when I'm trying to do homework.
I love your tumblr and I absolutely love this story so far. The play of words. Its so .. smooth? graceful? elagant?
Oh snap... Wait has she finished making the stars or...?? Cuz I was about to say.. Its that guy in real life!! He's not see through anymore!
This is just beauty in words for the human mind to enjoy, you can feel the emotions that that the character is feeling and I love it.
Oooo! this sounds awesome! i'm gonna keep reading. You have a great imagination. it's beautiful! :)
I love the rhythm of this sentence! this part is also very interesting in terms of telling us about the main character as well - in particular their need for someone who will look out for them and need for closeness - good character building!