60 minutes to live?!

60 minutes to live?!

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Everyday Rochelle Evans, a.k.a Chelly wakes up at 6am and takes the bus at 7am. She takes it this early because she wants to see her crush every morning. The only problem is she knows nothing about him! what happens when the subway stops between two stations and u find yourself stuck with your crush?! Oh and u only have 60 minutes to live?! Will she survive? Or die without even knowing her crush's name?! Follow Rochelle on her day and discover what is waiting for her... :)

amie_xx123 amie_xx123 Sep 11
never have i ever read something like the *drinks the whole bottle*
LostForReal LostForReal Nov 10, 2014
straightforward and informative - everything you need from a first chapter! =)
stars1 stars1 Mar 26, 2012
@Stand_in_the_rain haha thank you! I guess I might come back later and edit the whole story again :) thanks for ur comment!
Stand_in_the_rain Stand_in_the_rain Mar 24, 2012
YOu have a good start, but you should really consider a different first sentance. Hello my name is.... is typically not the best way to start a story. Other than that, you're doing great! :)
lovelyhearts123 lovelyhearts123 Oct 10, 2011
@stars1 Aww your Welcome :) but for real its good so far I wanna know what happen :D
stars1 stars1 Oct 10, 2011
@hockeyplayer44 thank you for your comment :) i'm sure your right so i'll keep posting :D