Five Star Hotel

Five Star Hotel

16.7M Reads 556K Votes 39 Part Story
Mia By MayaApples Completed

|#2 in Romance 2/20/16|

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"What's your name?" He asked.

"Sugar." I said randomly. Obviously that wasn't my name but it flew out of my mouth, not giving me any time to stop it. He probably thought I was some kind of stripper.

I could hear the smile in his voice as he spoke. "Well then Sugar, mind telling me why you're here, alone in that fancy, pink dress."

  • adult
  • fiction
  • foreign
  • hotel
  • italian
  • love
  • mafia
  • money
  • relationships
  • romance
HA HA HA! As a fellow writer, I totally get that! When I started to rewrite my book, I cringed every other sentence! Heck, I still do that 50 edited chapters later!
everyone in the comments is shocked but I have to take double what your supposed to take before they work 😕
NIHAL_JB NIHAL_JB 3 days ago
Don't you dare insult Louboutin heels those are a master piece
ktbozz ktbozz 2 days ago
I'm up here thinkin she regretted saying yes to an actual marriage proposal. This is a relief
xxxORTONxxx xxxORTONxxx 11 hours ago
This is one of the best stories I ever read, I mean it's flipping amazing..now if Randy Orton was the main man character it would be even more amazing...still I love it!!!! You should make this a paperback!
Parislove101 Parislove101 6 hours ago
Me then my mom would be like excuse me go change rn before I knock u out im like oh snap