Perfect Inbalance

Perfect Inbalance

531 Reads 23 Votes 6 Part Story
Marie By coldfall Updated Jan 21

She hurried to turn her flashlight on but it refused to shine. Fear crawled up her spine, the light in the room dimly flickered on again but the figure was no longer there.

  • afraid
  • blood
  • dark
  • haunted
  • house
  • hunt
  • lost
  • love
  • magic
  • possessive
  • romance
  • scared
  • scream
  • witch
Onetoomany1234 Onetoomany1234 Aug 29, 2011
This is great. There is only one mistake. The she, in she asked, needs to be capitalized.