Luciola

Luciola

1.8K Reads 527 Votes 65 Part Story
Hatu Shipanga By Alzara202 Updated 14 hours ago

Set in the 17th century  in the fictional Empire Of Holy Souviera. 
Alfonzo II , Emperor of Holy Souviera ,a powerful empire , filled with riches and fertile lands and a peaceful nation. But how long will the peace last when the Emperor dies of illness? Most importantly who will rule the lands after him?  A power struggle begins between his power hungry wife ,his ambitious three legitimate children and his bastardized daughter  from a failed marriage: Luciola.

  • adventure
  • african
  • angst
  • historicalfiction
  • love
  • lovehate
  • romance
  • royalty
  • scheming
  • sibbblingrivalry
NashNamibia NashNamibia Mar 30
Nice cover art, though the book title is fading in the background and isn't catching much attention. Overall this is impressive work, good grammar and all. Keep it up!!
NashNamibia NashNamibia Mar 17
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GemmaLawrence31 GemmaLawrence31 Dec 11, 2016
I like it! I think however that you should expand on this, more descriptions, slow the story down a little? voted
GemmaLawrence31 GemmaLawrence31 Dec 11, 2016
Good! If I were you though, I would separate out the dialogue from the descriptions, it will make the chapters clearer. voted
- - Aug 21, 2015
I love the way you write and the story is also good. Keep it up! :)