The Band (Not edited version)

The Band (Not edited version)

7K Reads 129 Votes 14 Part Story
Dani and Pao By lovesarcasm Updated May 20, 2012

Open Doors is the band of the moment, thousands of crazy fans across the world are craving for them. 

So when they announce that one person has the chosen ticket to go with them on a tour across the country for 24 days, their fans almost stop breathing.

Abigail Green is forced to go to the concert with her best friend, the band`s number one fan. 

One of them has the chosen ticket.

But will it be all flowers and rainbows? I don`t think so, since one of the best friends heart will stop beating in less than 30 days

Nothnig can be done about it, except enjoy the time that is left.

KellyKohler KellyKohler Mar 30, 2012
@lovesarcasm anytime honey but it's very good so keep writing it :)
lovesarcasm lovesarcasm Mar 30, 2012
@KellyKohler thanks for the feedback :) I´ll start editing this story soon and I will take into account all of what you pointed out, thanks again :D
XxTheFlyingGoose XxTheFlyingGoose Sep 28, 2011
oh and sorry if i sound a bit mean! i do not mean to be anything but honest!
                              
                              =)
XxTheFlyingGoose XxTheFlyingGoose Sep 28, 2011
it is a good story but it needs more work. the grammar is poor and the sentence construction is confusing.
mia_tasma mia_tasma Sep 06, 2011
WOW THIS IS AWESOME :D I DON'T WANNA STOP READING! But I have to :P MY TUMMY SOUNDS LKE A THUNDER STORM! :P Hungry :D TTFN! Btw AWESOME~! :D
lovesarcasm lovesarcasm Jun 13, 2011
@thisisbekah don´t worry about being harsh.. and yeah I´ve notices about the capitalization..and the grammar.. XD I´ll try to put those when I have time.. thanks :)