Don't say a word...

Don't say a word...

89.1K Reads 2.8K Votes 14 Part Story
Chelsey By chelseyleanne44 Completed

"dad i cant do this its not right just leave me alone please i beg you please please daddy don't not again please..." I cried in pain begging for him to stop 

"Ill do whatever i want you ungrateful little brat" he snarled 

He hurt me mentally, physically and emotionally just as he was about to leave he turns to face me presses his finger to my lips " don't say a word..." 

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  • alone
  • dad
  • dont
  • help
  • horror
  • life
  • pain
  • violence
mininimi94 mininimi94 Feb 19
Ok so people have an issue with the grammar and punctuation ... Don't be d*cks about it, be polite ffs or don't read the story at all if you have such a major issue . 
                              I like the story so far keep going x
X_ForeverLexii_X X_ForeverLexii_X Feb 09, 2017
??? Could you please use punctuation! That entire thing has no periods! My goodness, when I clicked on this book, I thought it would have good grammar, but I guess not.
neuroticessence neuroticessence Feb 28, 2016
I would probably read this if the spelling and grammar was considerably better. I don't know how people (and so many) can read it.
babypeach01 babypeach01 Jul 17, 2016
Can you spell at all? Punctuation? Sorry,but your story sucks ass.
vaevae25 vaevae25 Jun 18, 2016
Wow this was very stupid nice story but how can she be so bruised and no one came to aid.no broken bones?what is her problem her dad is a piece of turd and her mom didn't realise it wow
josh-duns-hair-dye josh-duns-hair-dye Mar 15, 2016
Okay, I'm understanding that this is sad but, can you please use correct grammar and punctuation? (By the way, not being rude on anyways)